Mar 3, 2018 03:04 PM
(This post was last modified: Mar 3, 2018 03:31 PM by G--D.)
This is a logo i made with a collaboration with a Real life friend
will appreciate any kind of advices
C&C are welcome <3
https://www.behance.net/UcefRS
![[Image: qa7Dq24.png]](https://i.imgur.com/qa7Dq24.png)
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Looks quite cool :) I like that it's a side on view of the panda & he looks quite mean looking. Good work!
The colors are good but the anatomy is a little off and it is throwing me.
Your line work is solid but I would work on refining the anatomy to really bring it all together.
I like this. I think it would look cool on the back of a shirt
Looks quite cool :) keep up the good work
i like the body itself plus the colors, yet those teeth and nose look weird - both dont fit in and somewhat destroy the actual good approach and make it look silly
The shape is great. There are few choppy lines, and bottom part could use some work, but overall, the shape looks really good IMHO.
Shading could definitely use some work. Some of it doesn't make much sense, it looks like you have multiple light sources. Also, the style of shading is not consistent. Some shades are thick AF while others are bearly visible.
Ellipse/shadow under the panda, again, doesn't make much sense, it's wider than the panda, which would make sense if the light source is right above panda, but than again, if you have a light source there, the rest of the shading is wrong.
Anywho, good job buddy, if you need any help, HMU. :)
The logo is nice but i feel like the teeth are unecessary and can be done without.
Otherwise i like it very much :D !
damn that awesome homie goodjob!
Looks awesome man. Idk how to feel about the nose tho.
Mar 7, 2018 07:08 AM
(This post was last modified: Mar 7, 2018 07:12 AM by G--D.)
(Mar 3, 2018 03:05 PM)Anima Wrote: Looks quite cool :) I like that it's a side on view of the panda & he looks quite mean looking. Good work!
thank you so much buddy ^^
(Mar 4, 2018 09:51 PM)iamfilth Wrote: The colors are good but the anatomy is a little off and it is throwing me.
Your line work is solid but I would work on refining the anatomy to really bring it all together.
thank you for the feedback <3 i iwll try to work in that nexte time <3
(Mar 4, 2018 10:42 PM)ZodiakFlesh Wrote: I like this. I think it would look cool on the back of a shirt
thank you ^^ yes it is
(Mar 5, 2018 02:07 AM)Nightcrxwler Wrote: Looks quite cool :) keep up the good work
thank you <3 will do ^^
(Mar 5, 2018 06:08 AM)eskimofo Wrote: i like the body itself plus the colors, yet those teeth and nose look weird - both dont fit in and somewhat destroy the actual good approach and make it look silly
you're right <3
thank you for the advice <3
(Mar 6, 2018 06:03 AM)Novica Wrote: The shape is great. There are few choppy lines, and bottom part could use some work, but overall, the shape looks really good IMHO.
Shading could definitely use some work. Some of it doesn't make much sense, it looks like you have multiple light sources. Also, the style of shading is not consistent. Some shades are thick AF while others are bearly visible.
Ellipse/shadow under the panda, again, doesn't make much sense, it's wider than the panda, which would make sense if the light source is right above panda, but than again, if you have a light source there, the rest of the shading is wrong.
Anywho, good job buddy, if you need any help, HMU. :)
as always a quality feedback <3 thank you boss will work harder to fix all that <3
(Mar 6, 2018 06:05 AM)Nanga Wrote: The logo is nice but i feel like the teeth are unecessary and can be done without.
Otherwise i like it very much :D !
thank you <3 yes will remove them ^^
(Mar 6, 2018 06:06 AM)Shoto Wrote: damn that awesome homie goodjob!
thank yoouu <3
(Mar 6, 2018 06:19 AM)Sun Diego. Wrote: Looks awesome man. Idk how to feel about the nose tho.
thanks <3
will fix it XD
That is beautiful. How long did this take you?
(Mar 6, 2018 06:05 AM)Nanga Wrote: The logo is nice but i feel like the teeth are unecessary and can be done without.
Otherwise i like it very much :D ! I quote Nanga, I think it would looks better without the teeth.
Anyway it looks cool, nice job!
thanks guy <3 love you all
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