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Oct 28, 2019 02:23 PM
(This post was last modified: Oct 28, 2019 02:24 PM by Anima.)
I'm pretty new to graphics so been providing free threads to peoples, what do yall think?
I don't think i'm good enough to start selling them yet but i think i'm on the right path? I welcome all constructive feedback to help me improve :)
![[Image: HV9XvTe.jpg]](https://i.imgur.com/HV9XvTe.jpg)
![[Image: OQ6Jcvf.jpg]](https://i.imgur.com/OQ6Jcvf.jpg)
The second one looks sick, at the first one its a little bit irritating that at the plan on the right is the vector thingy. Tho both sick!
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#1 top part is nice. Below part looks poor (no offense)
the emoticons are just lq/not in shape.
#2 is beautifull
Looks clean and professional, just like it should. Well done!
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looking clean brother, u re for sure on the right path. keep it up
Here are some comments, hope they help in any way, shape or form!
1st Design: Fonts are great, text effects are a bit iffy which is understandable given you're new to GFX. The drop shadow behind 'By Savitar' could benefit from an increased opacity and/or reduced size. I'd also maybe consider revising the text at the very top; the lil design with text 'Discord jacking guide' should be your point of emphasis and the text above it causes a cluster of information. What if you swapped the positions of them, made the jacking guide part larger, the other text smaller and put it directly below. Last thing, experiment with various strokes on text, shapes and design border. Remember, you want to create a "flow" of information and eye candy from top to bottom, simple lines can make a big difference when it comes to that!
2nd Design: Good work! This one took me by surprise, you're already improving greatly as a designer! Only 2 major things stood out to me; the pricing part ($5 per code) does not fit very well, looks awkward. My suggestion is to get rid of the white shapes, make the color of the text white (match your background) and find a nice, clean bold font. Last thing, the outer-glow on the 2 images at the bottom is a bit rough. Looks good, but could look a lot better. What would probably look cool is if you simply changed the color of it to a very light grey, it will blend nicely with the white background!
Sorry if that was hard to understand, it gets real hard to word my thoughts when it comes to photoshop lol.
Keep the good work up, nothing like some newfound creativity.
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(Nov 10, 2019 09:36 PM)Psilocybe Wrote: Here are some comments, hope they help in any way, shape or form!
1st Design: Fonts are great, text effects are a bit iffy which is understandable given you're new to GFX. The drop shadow behind 'By Savitar' could benefit from an increased opacity and/or reduced size. I'd also maybe consider revising the text at the very top; the lil design with text 'Discord jacking guide' should be your point of emphasis and the text above it causes a cluster of information. What if you swapped the positions of them, made the jacking guide part larger, the other text smaller and put it directly below. Last thing, experiment with various strokes on text, shapes and design border. Remember, you want to create a "flow" of information and eye candy from top to bottom, simple lines can make a big difference when it comes to that!
2nd Design: Good work! This one took me by surprise, you're already improving greatly as a designer! Only 2 major things stood out to me; the pricing part ($5 per code) does not fit very well, looks awkward. My suggestion is to get rid of the white shapes, make the color of the text white (match your background) and find a nice, clean bold font. Last thing, the outer-glow on the 2 images at the bottom is a bit rough. Looks good, but could look a lot better. What would probably look cool is if you simply changed the color of it to a very light grey, it will blend nicely with the white background!
Sorry if that was hard to understand, it gets real hard to word my thoughts when it comes to photoshop lol.
Keep the good work up, nothing like some newfound creativity.
Thank you very much for the feedback brother, i really appreicate it <3
They're amazing man! Sad that both Designs were for LQ users :c
Bleh
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(Nov 11, 2019 11:51 AM)flavoral Wrote: these all from your free service? damn you gotta start charging boi
I don't think it's quite good enough for that yet aha
(Nov 11, 2019 11:53 AM)Anima Wrote: I don't think it's quite good enough for that yet aha
Still much better than a lot of the paid services
Bleh
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(Nov 11, 2019 11:53 AM)flavoral Wrote: Still much better than a lot of the paid services
Maybe i'll have to look into doing paid services then :3 <3
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These are very dope. I would buy them.
Keep up the good work.
(Nov 11, 2019 11:54 AM)Anima Wrote: Maybe i'll have to look into doing paid services then :3 <3
you can always start cheap and raise your price with time
Bleh
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