Looking for some opinions on what is good and what isn't, feel free to speak your mind!
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(Jul 10, 2020 04:44 PM)SIM-1349466 Wrote: On first listen, pretty solid. Think it needs a little more "kick" to it though. Not entirely sure what, but you could probably tweak certain things after listening to it yourself a few times. Yeah I'll mess with the kick some more, or just make another one. Thanks for listening, appreciate it! (Jul 10, 2020 06:42 PM)Prox Wrote: Yeah I'll mess with the kick some more, or just make another one. You can make a VIP version 😎 I'm super picky with DnB so, my critique is a little "harsh" compared to the regular music listener. (Jul 10, 2020 08:43 PM)SIM-1349466 Wrote: You can make a VIP version 😎 Harsh critique eh? If you're saying all my track needs is a harder kick, then my song must not be half bad 😎 Hope you liked it, I know it doesn't stand up to top tier DnB. (Jul 10, 2020 09:04 PM)Prox Wrote: Harsh critique eh? If you're saying all my track needs is a harder kick, then my song must not be half bad 😎 There's very, very few DnB songs that I love. What did you make this in anyway? Also, forgot to mention this earlier, the flow is really nice. I like the instruments that cut in and out. (Jul 10, 2020 09:31 PM)SIM-1349466 Wrote: There's very, very few DnB songs that I love. Same here, there's only a few artists that I particularly love. I usually use Ableton but for this track I used FL Studio 20. Ah thanks man, I appreciate that!  (Jul 10, 2020 04:44 PM)SIM-1349466 Wrote: On first listen, pretty solid. Think it needs a little more "kick" to it though. Not entirely sure what, but you could probably tweak certain things after listening to it yourself a few times. I agree, it feels a little dry like something's missing but I'm not sure what
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(Jul 10, 2020 10:21 PM)Soulmate～っ☆ Wrote: I agree, it feels a little dry like something's missing but I'm not sure what Thanks for the feedback, if I find it I'll let you know 😁
Jul 12, 2020 01:22 PM
(This post was last modified: Jul 12, 2020 01:22 PM by Fortunate.)
It's a great song but as some of the others said it needs something. You could add some reverb to some of the instruments, mess with the eq and mix it better. It needs ambience as it's kind of dry at the moment. Ambience, reverb, filters, lowpass etc.
(Jul 12, 2020 01:22 PM)Fortunate Wrote: It's a great song but as some of the others said it needs something. You could add some reverb to some of the instruments, mess with the eq and mix it better. It needs ambience as it's kind of dry at the moment. Ambience, reverb, filters, lowpass etc. Thanks for the feedback, I've included all of that into my mix, since posting this I've also pitched up and down kicks and snares to give it a little more feel so that's probably what was missing. Ambience is included at the beginning and ending of the song, but during it's more about the reese bass and melody. That's just my take on a DnB song, there are many different kinds out there.    (Aug 3, 2020 07:50 AM)Raptor Wrote: The middle section was very nice Thanks for that :) I like it as well (Aug 3, 2020 02:25 PM)Parker Wrote: It's amazing man have you ever tried to make type beats? or also what DAW do you use Wow thank you I'm glad you thought it was amazing. Type beats? I typically use Ableton but for this track I used FL Studio 20. (Aug 3, 2020 07:43 PM)HᴇʀᴍᴇS Wrote: As an outsider who doesn't know anything about producing, but of listening.. I appreciate it man, I think it's pretty solid too. I got a record label to release it on Spotify and stuff so yeah! |
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