[pms]

Dementia medication
Spoiler (Click to View)I stare death in it’s eyes on a daily basis,
See death hiding in plain sight covered in grey hair and dementia medication,
Quietly death sits there - day in and out,
Waving new hello's every morning to it’s workers,
With a minor made up grin on it’s face,
All it takes to forget who the worker is meeting that morning,

One morning for the worker,
Eternal for death,
One hello for the worker,
A thousand hellos for death,

One day,
Forever,
Until one day,





By no means would i consider myself a good writer but i try my best and maybe 1/100 will be decent.
I will be posting almost daily poems as a challange, atleast very often.
Feedback and critique will always be appreciated!

[StuffSneak]

That is pretty cool. Keep at it mate.

[pms]

That is pretty cool. Keep at it mate.

Thank you man, writing another one soon enough :D

[StuffSneak]

Thank you man, writing another one soon enough :D

Yes yes. Keep it up. Looking forward towards the next one.

[Rahul007rhp]

Keep it up mate , you write pretty good according to me

[pms]

Keep it up mate , you write pretty good according to me

Thank you man, imma be writing more soon!

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[jacksonburtis]

Hello everyone, hope you feeling fine :)

[Jamika]

Dementia medication
Spoiler (Click to View)I stare death in it’s eyes on a daily basis,
See death hiding in plain sight covered in grey hair and dementia medication,
Quietly death sits there - day in and out,
Waving new hello's every morning to it’s workers,
With a minor made up grin on it’s face,
All it takes to forget who the worker is meeting that morning,

One morning for the worker,
Eternal for death,
One hello for the worker,
A thousand hellos for death,

One day,
Forever,
Until one day,





By no means would i consider myself a good writer but i try my best and maybe 1/100 will be decent.
I will be posting almost daily poems as a challange, atleast very often.
Feedback and critique will always be appreciated!

A little arrangement in words and making it bit longer can make it more better
But as general good 👍😊