[dolores]

hey hf i wrote a song and i wanted to ask what you guys thought about it:

please dont jwalk there
youll get a ticket
this is new york
and you cant get away with i-i-i-i-i-t
youre the sugar to my honey, the mango to my fruit
baby please dont jwalk there
youll get a ticket
this is new york
and you cant get away with i-i-i-i-i-t

if you're feeling sad, dont worry
ill bail you out
yeah ill bail you out
for jwalking, even though
i told you not to
yeah ill bail you out
of the new york jailhouse
just wait by the phone and i'll be there
(Dramatic song ending music here)

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Thanks, let me know hf!

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[Baghead]

Great lyrics, I live in LA and I know some producers. This is perfect radio material. I'll try to hook you up with a demo, what's your contact info?

[dolores]

Great lyrics, I live in LA and I know some producers. This is perfect radio material. I'll try to hook you up with a demo, what's your contact info?

i'll pm you my contact information.

i have some other stuff i'd love to get out there!

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[Zen‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎]

This is my shit.
If you can get a beat and get someone to sing it (preferably me as I have a great singing voice), I would pay top dollar to even just listen to it.

[Hydralic]

Best lyrics I've ever read, definitely 11/10.

[dolores]

thanks everyone for the positive feedback. maybe one day i can buy a sticky for one of my songs for exposure to my talents.

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