[Zen‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎]

Anyways, I made an illustration out of boredom.
If you can't tell I'm not good with hands and I didn't go into much detail on it either, but tell me what you think.

No 10/10 bullshit - I want some constructive criticism and what I can improve on.

[img]http://i4.minus.com/iAFCQnC43bOUR.png[/img]
I was thinking some feeling kinda quote like, "Happiness can be gone before you know it's there."
Kind of like how the best part of ice cream is the ending to some people, including myself.

Thank you.

[cyberducky]

I actually really like it, I usually have a ton of things to critique, but hmm. I guess you could try to maybe edit the bottom where the cone breaks to look better, but it looks pretty nice. Overall simple and clean illustration. Good job.

[PiraX]

It looks a bit too flat. The fingers should be more distinguishable.

[bοxxy]

Well, I would make the pinky not overlap the ring finger.
Imagine yourself holding the ice cream cone, your pinky doesn't go higher than your ring finger, well it shouldn't.

Other than that, everything else looks pretty decent if you ask me.

[cyberducky]

It looks a bit too flat. The fingers should be more distinguishable.

I think the opposite. He uses nice shadowing and even has a drop shadow on the fingers over the cone.

[Zen‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎]

Well, I would make the pinky not overlap the ring finger.
Imagine yourself holding the ice cream cone, your pinky doesn't go higher than your ring finger, well it shouldn't.

Other than that, everything else looks pretty decent if you ask me.

Good point, I didn't realize that. Thank you.

And thank you everyone else for everything said so far. I appreciate the feedback.

[Baghead]

Cool how there's some meaning behind it, the subtle stroke is unnecessary though. When I read the title I thought you were gonna be Ink Heart.

[Zen‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎]

Cool how there's some meaning behind it, the subtle stroke is unnecessary though. When I read the title I thought you were gonna be Ink Heart.

Shit, I remember seeing Ink Heart always in here. He was very talented but he hasn't visited the site in a while I don't think.
I always loved how he presented his work with the background along with his vectors.

Thank you for your input, and yeah, the stroke was pretty unnecessary to be honest.

[Baghead]

Shit, I remember seeing Ink Heart always in here. He was very talented but he hasn't visited the site in a while I don't think.
I always loved how he presented his work with the background along with his vectors.

Thank you for your input, and yeah, the stroke was pretty unnecessary to be honest.

He was a ripper the whole time. Everything he made was almost a carbon copy of this guy's work http://cronobreaker.deviantart.com/gallery/

[Zen‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎]

He was a ripper the whole time. Everything he made was almost a carbon copy of this guy's work http://cronobreaker.deviantart.com/gallery/

Holy shit, I didn't expect that. That is kind of sad.
But yes, thank you for your feedback and input!

[Goodbye HF...]

6/10 I really think you should put more detail when the ice cream is dripping other than that they have pointed out the other thing I was, gonna say besides that great work!

[Warbiest]

He was a ripper the whole time. Everything he made was almost a carbon copy of this guy's work http://cronobreaker.deviantart.com/gallery/

That's hilarious. If I didn't know any better I'd say that was his own DeviantArt haha.

Anyway, OT, pretty decent work. There really isn't much complain about since it's fairly simply. The best you can do right now is just improve by learning to add more detail, shadows, highlights and "textures". All of that stuff will make your work a lot more interesting to look at.

[Mr. Awesome Guy]

w0w m8 that's gr8, hope I'm not too l8; I r8 8/8.

srs tho, pretty good, but the fingers scare me a bit.