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To the moon & back.

Someone asked for a random concept with "I love you to the moon and back", here's what I done, keep in mind I'm new to illustrator and a beginner.

[Image: zvcNRX5.png]
I like the design, only bad thing I can see is that the font on the bottom could be a little better and suitable, and add the after to, apart from that good job.
The only thing I do not like about the design is that the type you used goes from a clean type to a handwritten type. It's just a minor inconsistency. I know that designs like these vary in type, but when varying type, I suggest sticking to the same family of type.

Regardless, it is clean and visually appealing.

P.S. You forgot "the" in the design.
"THE ONLY THING WE HAVE TO FEAR IS FEAR ITSELF."
- FRANKLIN D. ROOSEVELT

(Apr 23, 2015 09:42 AM)Liønheart Wrote:  The only thing I do not like about the design is that the type you used goes from a clean type to a handwritten type. It's just a minor inconsistency. I know that designs like these vary in type, but when varying type, I suggest sticking to the same family of type.

Regardless, it is clean and visually appealing.

P.S. You forgot "the" in the design.

I wasn't meant to add "the" into the design, as they said they didn't want it because it's obvious what it means, thanks!
(Apr 23, 2015 09:51 AM)dye. Wrote:  I wasn't meant to add "the" into the design, as they said they didn't want it because it's obvious what it means, thanks!
If that's the case, you should remove "moon" as well.
"THE ONLY THING WE HAVE TO FEAR IS FEAR ITSELF."
- FRANKLIN D. ROOSEVELT

(Apr 23, 2015 09:56 AM)Liønheart Wrote:  If that's the case, you should remove "moon" as well.

No because it takes up the space and looks better with text.
Very good.
Did you add this to deviantart.com?
Because, you definitely should :)
(Apr 23, 2015 10:27 AM)FuturisticGFX Wrote:  Very good.
Did you add this to deviantart.com?
Because, you definitely should :)

I have done, yeah! thanks:)
10/10 love it :3
~ Anime
11/10, gave me a boner. I am proud.
(Apr 24, 2015 07:06 AM)Gяαη∂тнεfтнσяsε Wrote:  11/10, gave me a boner. I am proud.
(Apr 24, 2015 07:05 AM)REKTED BY LOLI GODS Wrote:  10/10 love it :3
~ Anime

not sure if these are real rates, but thanks.
Everything seems off balance except the moon part
Really really cool design, clean, simple & smooth. 10/10 Keep the good work bro.

Thanks
-Igna700
This is exactly what it says... "I love you TO moon and back." Where is the "the"?
(Apr 27, 2015 02:44 PM)GrandTheftHorsePart2 Wrote:  This is exactly what it says... "I love you TO moon and back." Where is the "the"?

If you actually read the comments in this thread instead of being arrogant, then you would know, sadly you don't have the common sense.


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