Someone asked for a random concept with "I love you to the moon and back", here's what I done, keep in mind I'm new to illustrator and a beginner.
To the moon & back. |
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The only thing I do not like about the design is that the type you used goes from a clean type to a handwritten type. It's just a minor inconsistency. I know that designs like these vary in type, but when varying type, I suggest sticking to the same family of type.
Regardless, it is clean and visually appealing. P.S. You forgot "the" in the design. "THE ONLY THING WE HAVE TO FEAR IS FEAR ITSELF." - FRANKLIN D. ROOSEVELT (Apr 23, 2015 09:42 AM)Liønheart Wrote: The only thing I do not like about the design is that the type you used goes from a clean type to a handwritten type. It's just a minor inconsistency. I know that designs like these vary in type, but when varying type, I suggest sticking to the same family of type. I wasn't meant to add "the" into the design, as they said they didn't want it because it's obvious what it means, thanks! (Apr 23, 2015 09:51 AM)dye. Wrote: I wasn't meant to add "the" into the design, as they said they didn't want it because it's obvious what it means, thanks!If that's the case, you should remove "moon" as well. "THE ONLY THING WE HAVE TO FEAR IS FEAR ITSELF." - FRANKLIN D. ROOSEVELT (Apr 23, 2015 09:56 AM)Liønheart Wrote: If that's the case, you should remove "moon" as well. No because it takes up the space and looks better with text.
Everything seems off balance except the moon part
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