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I'm open to suggestions, anything I can change, if something needs fixing please let me know.
[Thoughts!] Thread Design |
(May 28, 2015 01:35 PM)KingMomo Wrote: not bad look basic and diff from other threads , though i didnt like the Title or the header . looks so basicYeah I didn't know how to incorporate it, I'll have a look at it today try make a better design.
HERE ARE ALL MY CRITIQUES
1. the background is alright but I can tell there was nearly no editing done to it. Darkening the background would be better for the text 2. The title should be in white 3. I dislike the font try Open Sans 4. The middle text is so squished and small it can't be read. The middle part should be white as well 5. Remove the drop shadow on the 'basic' and 'premium' titles 6. Bottom part should be smaller
It looks nice and fresh IMO man! :)
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Personally i'd use a completely different font for headers / titles like Mohave or Comic sans.
Maybe reduce the opacity on the overlay on the image too. I'd also suggest making this a lot bigger than just one section. Include info about the product, what it includes, what it doesnt etc. |
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