[Configz]

Hey HF..

could someone pleas this for errors.


“When I was eleven I was playing little league ball. I can’t even look the other fathers in the face anymore, Marilyn. ” Often fathers would love to see their sons to follow in their steps, and often it is probably also the same father wants deep inside that you either do the same or do even better than he did, but what if your son chooses to go a completely different way? Some fathers would accept it, but then there are others who cannot resist it. This we see in the text "Bobby baton" written by Joseph Silverman, father Robert can not bear to see his son make a fool of himself, especially since he is playing with a baton, he wants his son to be more manly like himself when he was young, Bobby's mother Marilyn, loves her son to death, but she knows that she cant do anything about.


^ thats the text

thanks on forward.

- Configz

[ShizzleFly]

Hey HF..

could someone pleas this for errors.


“When I was eleven I was playing little league ball. I can’t even look the other fathers in the face anymore, Marilyn. ” Often fathers would love to see their sons to follow in their steps, and often it is probably also the same father wants deep inside that you either do the same or do even better than he did, but what if your son chooses to go a completely different way? Some fathers would accept it, but then there are others who cannot resist it. This we see in the text "Bobby baton" written by Joseph Silverman, father Robert can not bear to see his son make a fool of himself, especially since he is playing with a baton, he wants his son to be more manly like himself when he was young, Bobby's mother Marilyn, loves her son to death, but she knows that she cant do anything about.


^ thats the text

thanks on forward.

- Configz

“When I was eleven I was playing little league ball. I can’t even look the other fathers in the face anymore, Marilyn. ” Often, fathers would love to see their sons to follow in their steps. And often it is probably also the same father twants deep inside that you either do the same or do even better than he did, but what if your son chooses to go a completely different way? Some fathers would accept it, but then there are others who cannot resist it. This we see in the text "Bobby baton" written by Joseph Silverman, father Robert can not bear to see his son make a fool of himself, especially since he is playing with a baton. He wants his son to be more manly like himself when he was young, Bobby's mother Marilyn, loves her son to the death, but she knows that she can't do anything about.


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[Demoz]

I'm sorry but I cannot understand the first part; It's extremely fragmented and the sentences don't make complete sense. Also disregard ShizzleFly's response, it didn't make it any better.

[Cheeb]

I really don't understand this enough to check for errors.