Jun 19, 2017 01:01 PM
(This post was last modified: Jun 19, 2017 01:30 PM by SIM-1729678.)
Getting into GFX. It's my 5th thread design. Done a lot of things besides it but never really did any thread designs. Need some feedback!
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Very nice design ScreemS made for me. I appreciate the quick and professional help.
I'm not too big on GFX, but in my eyes everything is alright. Hopefully someone can give a more constructive feedback/criticism towards this design he made me today.
(Jun 19, 2017 01:04 PM)Gustav. Wrote: Very nice design ScreemS made for me. I appreciate the quick and professional help.
I'm not too big on GFX, but in my eyes everything is alright. Hopefully someone can give a more constructive feedback/criticism towards this design he made me today.
It was a pleasure working for you!
Jun 19, 2017 01:21 PM
(This post was last modified: Jun 19, 2017 01:21 PM by SIM-2285183.)
The first S in stats isn't completely blue, neither is the Q in Questing.
Also, to be grammatically correct, it'd be Discord and not discord, considering it's a program, it's a noun? (or pronoun), therefore capitalising the first letter.
Apologies if I'm coming off as a dick, just pointing out what I saw was wrong or what could be improved upon.
Thank you :)
(Jun 19, 2017 01:21 PM)SIM-2285183 Wrote: ![[Image: yZBYC33.png]](https://i.imgur.com/yZBYC33.png)
The first S in stats isn't completely blue, neither is the Q in Questing.
Also, to be grammatically correct, it'd be Discord and not discord, considering it's a program, it's a noun? (or pronoun), therefore capitalising the first letter.
![[Image: pFgE31y.png]](https://i.imgur.com/pFgE31y.png)
Apologies if I'm coming off as a dick, just pointing out what I saw was wrong or what could be improved upon.
Thank you :)
Fixed what I could and then my Photoshop randomly expired. F*CK.
would you mind sharing what font that is i really like it haha
(Jun 19, 2017 01:33 PM)Dеceived Wrote: would you mind sharing what font that is i really like it haha
Myriad pro bold
Jun 19, 2017 08:52 PM
(This post was last modified: Jun 19, 2017 08:54 PM by Anton Chigurh.)
It looks more appealing when you split it up into sections instead of one solid background.
Very nice design. Looked nice and cool. Good luck
(Jun 19, 2017 08:52 PM)Anton Chigurh Wrote: It looks more appealing when you split it up into sections instead of one solid background.
Thank you for the feedback. :)
Jun 20, 2017 03:45 AM
(This post was last modified: Jun 20, 2017 03:51 AM by sokarua.)
I don't think hightlightning the word Kid is a good idea, you will come off as unproffessional, and,well, a kid, so I suggest using other wording.
Maybe something like "I have played the game since 2xxx" or something like that
Also second and 4rth lines of TOS sound bad and too simular, write something like " It may take up to 2 or 3 additional hours to complite the task"
(Jun 20, 2017 03:45 AM)sokarua Wrote: I don't think hightlightning the word Kid is a good idea, you will come off as unproffessional, and,well, a kid, so I suggest using other wording.
Maybe something like "I have played the game since 2xxx" or something like that
Also second and 4rth lines of TOS sound bad and too simular, write something like " It may take up to 2 or 3 additional hours to complite the task"
The text that is on the thread is what the customer requested.
(Jun 19, 2017 08:52 PM)Anton Chigurh Wrote: It looks more appealing when you split it up into sections instead of one solid background.
^ This is my only problem with the design.
Using borders, colour schemes and different backgrounds (that all hold the same theme) will make your designs look way better.
Aside from that, it's a nice piece. Keep it up OP. 🤝
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