[findingnature]

https://soundcloud.com/high-c123/kyle-ro...ft/s-QcheH

Can anyone give me any pointers/opinions while I am completing the rough draft of my new song?

[Triaxle]

To start with, you should look into mastering the vocals better with the track, what program are you using? the vocals do sound a bit effected to the point of not being too noticeable. Good Flow, Good tune, instrumental is nice as well.

[findingnature]

To start with, you should look into mastering the vocals better with the track, what program are you using? the vocals do sound a bit effected to the point of not being too noticeable. Good Flow, Good tune, instrumental is nice as well.

I use Garageband, I am wanting to get FL Studio but I don't even know where to begin.

[Triaxle]

I use Garageband, I am wanting to get FL Studio but I don't even know where to begin.

I currently make music and master in FL Studio, its a very powerful program and can do anything you need it to do, just be patient with it! (Please note my negative rep is for a matching IP, but I attend university so It cannot be helped, I'm trying to give good high quality conversations and help here!)

[prada ⠀]

If you're a mac user switch to Logic Pro

[findingnature]

If you're a mac user switch to Logic Pro

Opinions about actual song? And thanks I’ll try it.

[prada ⠀]

Chorus is actually pretty good but autotune sounds like dick on your verses. the bridge is really bad. lyrics are sporadic and have no direction

[jobi]

Opinions about actual song? And thanks I’ll try it.

work on your flow, at 2:25 your flow switched up and was a lot better than the beginning half of the song.

idk about the singing it may be the vocals, or just your voice but it sounds really weak

[findingnature]

Chorus is actually pretty good but autotune sounds like dick on your verses. the bridge is really bad. lyrics are sporadic and have no direction

Thank you for the thought. I’ll try working on the bridge and yes I need to learn how to use auto tune effectively instead of cranking it all the way up lol.

[BinaryWho]

Get better equipment, I can tell right off this was recorded in a "lower class" DAW, Just torrent something FL Studio or Abelton. and learn to use that, I personally use Audition. Also you're microphone sounds so bad, im sorry. The clarity just isn't there.
Sorry if I seem harsh, just some constructive criticism.