[Chosen 1]

Check out this beat I made, leave a like and comment for me please 🤫

[WhenIDie]

Really fuck with this beat and your others. Would be down to collab. Drop me a pm.

[scam.]

I'll drop some serious feedback.
First off the midi guitar needs more humanisation. It sounds too electronic. Play with velocities more and don't stay on the grid. I've found sample instrument guitars usually sound better at lower velocities.
Secondly your 808 is out of key. Make sure to stay in the key of the melody. Bass should follow the bass/root notes of the chords. Outside of that use fifths and thirds for additional notes. It sounds like the sample is out of tune also. May be better off using a different one. Notice the pitch wobbles giving a kinda disorienting detune effect. Personally I don't like that in bass.
I think a higher pitched hat and a snare with more body would do justice too.

[WhenIDie]

I'll drop some serious feedback.
First off the midi guitar needs more humanisation. It sounds too electronic. Play with velocities more and don't stay on the grid. I've found sample instrument guitars usually sound better at lower velocities.
Secondly your 808 is out of key. Make sure to stay in the key of the melody. Bass should follow the bass/root notes of the chords. Outside of that use fifths and thirds for additional notes.  It sounds like the sample is out of tune also. May be better off using a different one. Notice the pitch wobbles giving a kinda disorienting detune effect. Personally I don't like that in bass.
I think a higher pitched hat and a snare with more body would do justice too.

Interesting, I thought the guitar sounded pretty legit. Though I do agree the bass is a lil off, but easily fixable.
And yea I think the hats need a pitch up - snare is ight imo. Tho do try layering and widening.

[Sonata]

love lil peep, glad u making peep type beats :)

[WhenIDie]

Dropped vocals on this: soundclouddotcom/imaliveagain/findme-master-beat-lil-pope/s-JGC2g