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[tilly2221]

This is an interesting production and your EDM is better than your rap, which are two different genres, but you have more talent in EDM than rap.
Because rap is rap, and Mac Miller / Nate Dogg productions are difficult to perfect, one could say that it's impossible. I think Mac Miller never had a hit, whereas Nate Dogg had that song which I forget.

Edm on the other hand (future house etc) is more possible to write a hit song in. This could be, but in this track in particular, it needs more tying-together, if that makes any sense.
Because the start is too distraught / ambient and then the chords (synths) are too low freq and did you add distance to them?

In a perfect Edm track the synths have to hit, they can't be just an ambient effect, the production has to revolve around the synths

[Local Celeb]

This is an interesting production and your EDM is better than your rap, which are two different genres, but you have more talent in EDM than rap.
Because rap is rap, and Mac Miller / Nate Dogg productions are difficult to perfect, one could say that it's impossible. I think Mac Miller never had a hit, whereas Nate Dogg had that song which I forget.

Edm on the other hand (future house etc) is more possible to write a hit song in. This could be, but in this track in particular, it needs more tying-together, if that makes any sense.
Because the start is too distraught / ambient and then the chords (synths) are too low freq and did you add distance to them?

In a perfect Edm track the synths have to hit, they can't be just an ambient effect, the production has to revolve around the synths

So I made the start of the song like that so I could DJ it, and spin in to it. Truthfully I'm thinking about how it's going to play in the club 😅

I appreciate your compliments hey, that's cool. I agree that my EDM is better than my rap 😁

I'll play with what you said about the song revolving around synths, sometime.

[DashPHP]

This is sounding really good man. Nice!

[Local Celeb]

This is sounding really good man. Nice!

Let that coochie BREATHE 😂🤘