[GetRichG]

I recently had an interview which went great.I was asked to complete an exercise online and wait for them to get back to me. The exercise asked to present their service to a potential client and try and sell it. If you got time, please take a look and provide me your feedback.

MY ANSWER:

- MyPOS is a fintech making it's way into the POS market with our affordable card payment devices and multi currency merchant accounts. We currently offer payment solutions in more than 30 European countries.
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- One of the great benefits we offer at myPOS to our business partners is what we call the ‘pay as you go' model which allows our partners to utilize our services without having to pay any monthly fees or sign a long term contract. There are many other benefits that come with using our service, I am going to list just a few for you below:

- Instant access to funds after transactions
- Free multi-currency business account with IBAN
- Range of card reader models for mobility or full POS
- Integrated SIM card for using readers across the UK/EU
- Accept all major card brands and mobile wallets

Oh shoot! I completely forgot to mention something very important to you. Unlike our competitors who charge their clients 1.75% or more per transaction, we at myPOS only charge our partners 1.10%, because we know that HIGH costs are the biggest enemy of a successful business. Our team is not looking for clients, we NEED partners. We at myPOS understand that your SUCCESS is our SUCCESS and that is why we can’t wait to have you on-board. Allow us to take your business to the next level with our top-notch payment solutions and let’s be SUCCESSFUL TOGETHER.


You're ready to take the next step? GREAT! Based on the size of your business we would like to offer you our most powerful payment terminal yet at a REDUCED PRICE. MyPOS Pro is our latest achievement, providing our partners access to the future of payments. Our new terminal runs on Android 10 with a quad-core processor to ensure flawless performance 24/7. We have also equipped our brand new terminal with a high speed thermal printer for quick issuing of receipts and the most powerful battery on the market that supports all-day active use.


And if that’s not enough, we made sure to include a FREE data SIM card integrated into the device to make life easier for our valued partners .
You are only a few clicks away from having access to the future of payments at a very affordable price too - £179.00. Head to our website and check out the videos of this BEAUTY and if you LOVE IT as much as our partners do, then place a quick order on our store.


If you're still not quite sure whether myPOS is the best payment solution for your business, please check our website for more details about our services or send us an email with any questions you may have for us.

[TooBurnt]

My feedback: WTF is going on here?

[GetRichG]

My feedback: WTF is going on here?

Is this the wrong section for my question?

[Jamika]

I recently had an interview which went great.I was asked to complete an exercise online and wait for them to get back to me. The exercise asked to present their service to a potential client and try and sell it. If you got time, please take a look and provide me your feedback.

MY ANSWER:

- MyPOS is a fintech making it's way into the POS market with our affordable card payment devices and multi currency merchant accounts. We currently offer payment solutions in more than 30 European countries.
-
- One of the great benefits we offer at myPOS to our business partners is what we call the ‘pay as you go' model which allows our partners to utilize our services without having to pay any monthly fees or sign a long term contract. There are many other benefits that come with using our service, I am going to list just a few for you below:

- Instant access to funds after transactions
- Free multi-currency business account with IBAN
- Range of card reader models for mobility or full POS
- Integrated SIM card for using readers across the UK/EU
- Accept all major card brands and mobile wallets

Oh shoot! I completely forgot to mention something very important to you. Unlike our competitors who charge their clients 1.75% or more per transaction, we at myPOS only charge our partners 1.10%, because we know that HIGH costs are the biggest enemy of a successful business. Our team is not looking for clients, we NEED partners. We at myPOS understand that your SUCCESS is our SUCCESS and that is why we can’t wait to have you on-board. Allow us to take your business to the next level with our top-notch payment solutions and let’s be SUCCESSFUL TOGETHER.


You're ready to take the next step? GREAT! Based on the size of your business we would like to offer you our most powerful payment terminal yet at a REDUCED PRICE. MyPOS Pro is our latest achievement, providing our partners access to the future of payments. Our new terminal runs on Android 10 with a quad-core processor to ensure flawless performance 24/7. We have also equipped our brand new terminal with a high speed thermal printer for quick issuing of receipts and the most powerful battery on the market that supports all-day active use.


And if that’s not enough, we made sure to include a FREE data SIM card integrated into the device to make life easier for our valued partners .
You are only a few clicks away from having access to the future of payments at a very affordable price too - £179.00. Head to our website and check out the videos of this BEAUTY and if you LOVE IT as much as our partners do, then place a quick order on our store.


If you're still not quite sure whether myPOS is the best payment solution for your business, please check our website for more details about our services or send us an email with any questions you may have for us.

I liked the way of presenting u made, with little more effort and orgnization u can do excellent one.

[GetRichG]

I liked the way of presenting u made, with little more effort and orgnization u can do excellent one.

Thank you for taking the time to read it. I really appreciate your feedback.

[secret_code]

I recently had an interview which went great.I was asked to complete an exercise online and wait for them to get back to me. The exercise asked to present their service to a potential client and try and sell it. If you got time, please take a look and provide me your feedback.

MY ANSWER:

- MyPOS is a fintech making it's way into the POS market with our affordable card payment devices and multi currency merchant accounts. We currently offer payment solutions in more than 30 European countries.
-
- One of the great benefits we offer at myPOS to our business partners is what we call the ‘pay as you go' model which allows our partners to utilize our services without having to pay any monthly fees or sign a long term contract. There are many other benefits that come with using our service, I am going to list just a few for you below:

- Instant access to funds after transactions
- Free multi-currency business account with IBAN
- Range of card reader models for mobility or full POS
- Integrated SIM card for using readers across the UK/EU
- Accept all major card brands and mobile wallets

Oh shoot! I completely forgot to mention something very important to you. Unlike our competitors who charge their clients 1.75% or more per transaction, we at myPOS only charge our partners 1.10%, because we know that HIGH costs are the biggest enemy of a successful business. Our team is not looking for clients, we NEED partners. We at myPOS understand that your SUCCESS is our SUCCESS and that is why we can’t wait to have you on-board. Allow us to take your business to the next level with our top-notch payment solutions and let’s be SUCCESSFUL TOGETHER.


You're ready to take the next step? GREAT! Based on the size of your business we would like to offer you our most powerful payment terminal yet at a REDUCED PRICE. MyPOS Pro is our latest achievement, providing our partners access to the future of payments. Our new terminal runs on Android 10 with a quad-core processor to ensure flawless performance 24/7. We have also equipped our brand new terminal with a high speed thermal printer for quick issuing of receipts and the most powerful battery on the market that supports all-day active use.


And if that’s not enough, we made sure to include a FREE data SIM card integrated into the device to make life easier for our valued partners .
You are only a few clicks away from having access to the future of payments at a very affordable price too - £179.00. Head to our website and check out the videos of this BEAUTY and if you LOVE IT as much as our partners do, then place a quick order on our store.


If you're still not quite sure whether myPOS is the best payment solution for your business, please check our website for more details about our services or send us an email with any questions you may have for us.

Looks nice, but here's a quick tip: avoid using "because", it's ok, but when abused makes the whole thing look more like someone trying to excuse himself or justify himself, which doesn't play very well

[Deany]

Sorry not reading all of that chief.

[GetRichG]

Looks nice, but here's a quick tip: avoid using "because", it's ok, but when abused makes the whole thing look more like someone trying to excuse himself or justify himself, which doesn't play very well

I appreciate your advise.