[iFap]

I was interested in being the applicant for the editor or just an alpha tester. I can correct words and I can spell things like rendezvous, not sure if that is enough but atleast I posted.

[voltology]

If you are looking for someone to critic i would love too help used too be a huge gfx designer on youtube & other forum sites pm me .

[Fireworks]

I can be a writer, or even a creative mind. I've read a couple of these recently and really like them. I can also do editing as well. I'm downloading the demo you posted and I'll let you know what I think in a second.

First thing I can tell you is that the GUI is pretty bad. The buttons are really flat and lack personality, and the speech backdrop seemed to big. But yea, I would love to help any way I can. If you're interested add me on Skype. I've got another artist that we could use as well. :)

[King~]

I could help out with either editing or beta/alpha testing.

It's nice that you're using Ren'Py for the VN. IMO it actually works much better than some "commercial" options.

If you need any miscellaneous help with anything too, feel free to ask.
I don't know python past operators and such, but I do understand programming. Probably can't help, but who knows :)

[Aiba]

Good luck with your ventures, I myself also have a small VN project going