[Syke.]

Hey guy's here it is, this is something new i made and i really think im getting better at doing vector's, i used a tutorial for shading on the moon.

Thanks for checking it out!

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[ca9a2536fd8b17df76f7ee082]

What I like

• It's blue
  

What need improvement?

• Ploot needs to be more "out there" in other words "more recognizable"
  


• Needs more detail
  


• It's too blah for me
  


• It should have a a darker blue and the stars should look sparkly
  

How to Improve?
Change the Ploot font color and make it more recognizable, make it more detailed

Rate
6/10

This is my opinion, but good job man

[Syke.]

Well thanks man. But I don't want the name to stand out the main focus point should be the image. And yea more detail would be better, but my vectors are always very cartoony. But thanks for the input.

[ca9a2536fd8b17df76f7ee082]

Fair enough, I'm just saying that you're going to receive a lot of hate from the signature. You also might get it removed from a staff member for it being annoying.

Good luck!

[Weed™]

Yeah I would switch out the P in your sig for the one in your avi. As for the vector, pretty nice. Better than I could do

[Syke.]

Hmm I doubt that it will be a prop. I see people with it all the time....but if they do ill change it out. But I really like how it looks

[LightBlue]

I dislike text on art, that's why I stopped putting a 'signature' on my art long ago. Obviously people will try to rip it but they will have to live with the fact that they take credit for something another person made. I think text just ruins it honestly. The star things look to much alike, you need to make some more diversity between them.

Maybe you could use a gradient on the sky, since the sky is never just one color blue

[enobGorkah]

7/10, To tired to give constructive feedback, but whats the name of the font?

[Ryuuji Takasu]

I dislike text on art, that's why I stopped putting a 'signature' on my art long ago. Obviously people will try to rip it but they will have to live with the fact that they take credit for something another person made. I think text just ruins it honestly. The star things look to much alike, you need to make some more diversity between them.

Maybe you could use a gradient on the sky, since the sky is never just one color blue

Didn't put up a tutorial on a other thread where you learned how to make this?

On topic:
Looks awesome but night-sky? it more looks like its broad day light tbh maybe use a darker blue instead?

[Syke.]

Thanks, yea and honestly this was gonna just be a signature so i didint really do a whole lot with it. but im planning on doing it on my next one.

[Baghead]

I can see you're improving with your vectoring, good job.
Although your work is cartoonish it could always use more detail. I know this because my style is somewhat cartoonish as well. You could do a lot with the moon, add craters and possibly more of a circular shadow (to show the dark side of the moon).

Keep practicing

[Syke.]

I can see you're improving with your vectoring, good job.
Although your work is cartoonish it could always use more detail. I know this because my style is somewhat cartoonish as well. You could do a lot with the moon, add craters and possible more of a circular shadow (to show the dark side of the moon).

Keep practicing

OMFG Bag-Head you are my inspiration for graphic design....you just made my day by commenting on here.

[Elektric]

Not very fond of the moon and shit on it.

[Monte Cristo]

I defiantly didn't see Ploot at first glace, however overall design is above average 6/10.