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Sales Thread Design [Serious Feedback Needed] Update - Revision 2
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May 18, 2014 06:03 AM (This post was last modified: May 21, 2014 10:13 AM by SoldierX.)
I would love to have your say upon this design I made today, any sort of comment is appreciated till it helps me and contribute to my learning.



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May 18, 2014 06:07 AM
I'd say 9/10, make the width less. Thanks ;)
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May 18, 2014 07:11 AM
User above took my words :)
Good graphic but make the width less.
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May 18, 2014 07:15 AM
The spacing in the top box between the texts are too wide, also make the height of the first box smaller. Furthermore try experimenting with different shades of green that are more visually appealing and casual so no strain is caused on the viewers eyes. Also the sales box is way overcrowded for a simple design such as yours, sorry if my CnC wasn't too good. I just couldn't find many faults with your design I would give it a 9/10.
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May 18, 2014 07:25 AM
Thank you for the feedback guys, I will try to find another color for my shop and other things.
Thank you very much.
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May 18, 2014 09:49 AM
I'd work on your grammar before posting this. I understand you're not American but it looks bad. One does not need to be capitalized. Perhaps, in only one year of designing, I have completed 400 orders.
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May 18, 2014 09:50 AM
(May 18, 2014 09:49 AM)goldenarms_ Wrote:  I'd work on your grammar before posting this. I understand you're not American but it looks bad. One does not need to be capitalized. Perhaps, in only one year of designing, I have completed 400 orders.

Thanks for that 😝 and apart from my stupid grammar, how do you find the design ?
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May 18, 2014 09:53 AM
I would rate 9/10 looks great with your sig aswell...
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May 18, 2014 10:10 AM
(May 18, 2014 09:49 AM)goldenarms_ Wrote:  I'd work on your grammar before posting this. I understand you're not American but it looks bad. One does not need to be capitalized. Perhaps, in only one year of designing, I have completed 400 orders.
Updated the thread mate.

(May 18, 2014 09:53 AM)Yelsdnah Wrote:  I would rate 9/10 looks great with your sig aswell...
Thank You very much mate, I really appreciate your feedback.
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May 18, 2014 10:40 AM
(May 18, 2014 10:10 AM)SoldierX Wrote:  Updated the thread mate.

Thank You very much mate, I really appreciate your feedback.

It might just be me or the new one looks exactly the same to the old one, or at least not noticeably different.
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May 18, 2014 10:44 AM
(May 18, 2014 10:40 AM)General Zoddddd Wrote:  It might just be me or the new one looks exactly the same to the old one, or at least not noticeably different.

Change the color of the Get a quote button, adjusted the grammar in the header, added prices to the services list. 🙂
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May 19, 2014 12:13 AM
"Good design goes to heaven; bad design goes everywhere"
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May 19, 2014 09:48 AM
(May 19, 2014 12:13 AM)Baghead Wrote:  "Good design goes to heaven; bad design goes everywhere"
lolwat

It is a quote mate, not by me of course but I read it over the internet.
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May 19, 2014 10:12 AM
(May 19, 2014 09:48 AM)SoldierX Wrote:  It is a quote mate, not by me of course but I read it over the internet.

stupid quotes like that just make you look stupid.

it doesn't mean anything.
i'm not a douche, i'm just honest
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May 19, 2014 10:13 AM
(May 19, 2014 10:12 AM)Waxy Wrote:  stupid quotes like that just make you look stupid.

it doesn't mean anything.

Anyways apart from that stupid quote, how did you find the design ?
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