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As i walk in the bay,
The wind blows as the waves roll,
Summer is where i am.
Factory Worker

Working late, dark thoughts,
He looks outside for some light.
Business clouds the stars.
nameless
(Jul 28, 2015 12:20 PM)BotMarket Wrote:  As i walk in the bay,
The wind blows as the waves roll,
Summer is where i am.

I like yours :D
Nice haiku mate.
The quieter you are, the more you are able to hear.
Nobody dies a virgin, life fucks us all.
(Jul 28, 2015 07:46 AM)dcent Wrote:  Lying to myself,
done saying I'm done playing,
perhaps tomorrow.

(Jul 28, 2015 08:34 AM)TerenceMcKenna Wrote:  I scream in silence
She holds on tightly, my love
I, not a quiver.

(Jul 28, 2015 12:13 PM)Tokyo Wrote:  i ate some chicken
the egg came before chicken
it was delicious

Some of these Haiku's are pretty decent imo. I liked Dcent's the best due to the fact that some of us lie to ourselves, saying we'll be done, but we can't stop. We tell ourselves that we just need one more day, but that leads to another...and another..and so forth. Then Raven's shook me..if you know love and pain and can find deeper meanings in words, Raven's is top notch. Recommend this member. Stazzy's is just funny to me, and he's a great member, so look into that guy!

Some good applicants thus far, but some bad ones(probably just members who don't know how to write a haiku haha). Keep it up everyone, and good luck to all of you!

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Another take on the factory worker I wrote above:

Each night, the stars shine.
Business smokes, so we are blind.
Still at work we grind.
nameless
I walk through the city
Taking in all of the lights
I feel happiness.
Woke up, shinny day;
Today I hugged my grandmom;
Wait, I was dreaming.

I wanted to write something that actually had meaning for me but it came out shit..
The quieter you are, the more you are able to hear.
Nobody dies a virgin, life fucks us all.
Roses are red, violets are blue;
let me into void
or i'll ddos you
(Jul 28, 2015 02:45 PM)haydrazs Wrote:  Roses are red, violets are blue;
let me into void
or i'll ddos you

Vouch for this method. Works 100% of the time.
Tried a different approach and made one that could be read both ways:

Shadows come closer.
As I elevate this light,
It all becomes bright.
nameless
harmonizing beats
rhythmic, flowing, serene mind
tranquil, undisturbed
When I fly
I can't believe how high
Maybe today, again


When I fly
I can't believe how high
Maybe today, again

- Cain
frosted branches sway
chilling wind, so dark and gray
muffled, quiet day

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I love haikus :3
The sweet smell of flowers
the hot sun touching my skin
I become alive.
lithe, she softly stalks
gleaming fur of midnight hues
sliding through the grass

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