[Intern]

Just up late night and saw some inspiration.

and i came up with this.

Any thoughts on where I can expand on this?

[Bkotz]

Not cover up the renders face would prolly be a good start.
Theres too much empty space on this. It just screams unfinished.
The circles should be behind the render as well, not infront of it.

You need to add something that will catch the observers interest. This is really boring and uninteresting to look at. A quick glance and im ready to look away already.

[Intern]

Not cover up the renders face would prolly be a good start.
Theres too much empty space on this. It just screams unfinished.
The circles should be behind the render as well, not infront of it.

You need to add something that will catch the observers interest. This is really boring and uninteresting to look at. A quick glance and im ready to look away already.

Hmm I liked having the circle cover the face :o ,

My inspiration had way more text - and the main part was actually the text - so that's probably where I went wrong.

I love the idea of having circles behind it at some parts.

[Bkotz]

Hmm I liked having the circle cover the face :o ,

My inspiration had way more text - and the main part was actually the text - so that's probably where I went wrong.

I love the idea of having circles behind it at some parts.

If your going to hide the face you have to make look like it belongs that way. Instead of just brushing over top of it. Blending is key to design but can be the most difficult. Try different methods.

[Nyxuo]

I disagree. The face covered looks good. I would've however kept the cover over her face a circle similar to the other ones. Or made sure to use a hard brush and a smaller setting if you wanted that part to look 'scribbled'. I also would've gone for some kind of retro-ish effect using a texture or stippling. The render looks a little 'hard' maybe a softer tone on the black could've helped to make it seem more blended. Your use of font on the 'presented by' part could use a little work with spacing and also the 'KEMOA' I feel could've been a better font.

I like it. I've seen similar work and it's a style I can appreciate. Good work anyways but that was just my two cents.

[Intern]

I disagree. The face covered looks good. I would've however kept the cover over her face a circle similar to the other ones. Or made sure to use a hard brush and a smaller setting if you wanted that part to look 'scribbled'. I also would've gone for some kind of retro-ish effect using a texture or stippling. The render looks a little 'hard' maybe a softer tone on the black could've helped to make it seem more blended. Your use of font on the 'presented by' part could use a little work with spacing and also the 'KEMOA' I feel could've been a better font.

I like it. I've seen similar work and it's a style I can appreciate. Good work anyways but that was just my two cents.

Oh thanks a lot man,

- Yeah for the circle brush , I had a hard time replicating a circular motion with my mouse :( .

- Hmm yeah maybe adding two fonts might not be a bad idea, I might keep working on this tonight ? .


Thanks for the positive CC man, I really appreciate it ✌.

[Callmedragon]

The covered face is kind of weird to me as well, also nothing really stands out to me. Needs some color or something.

[Intern]

The covered face is kind of weird to me as well, also nothing really stands out to me. Needs some color or something.

It's a different kind of art style forsure ✌