Hello HF,
I would like some serious and constructive feedback for my work in progresss design.
![[Image: b13eba541b.png]](https://puu.sh/CXp3o/b13eba541b.png)
Regards,
ChaoticHaze
Very clean, good color scheme and not cluttered. The background is a little too black tho, maybe try out a grey one.
Your website isn't ugly, but it isn't beautiful, to be completely honest. I'm also not a fan of the extremely dark background, or of dark themes in general. Beyond my personal opinions, I don't like your metric of the proxy speed. Sure, I see why you're using batteries to represent the speed, but it really doesn't even make sense. I would use actual numbers or an icon related to speed, not an icon of something entirely unrelated to speed.
Je t'aime
(Apr 22, 2022 04:39 PM)-Scrub Wrote: Jokes on you, I'm not smart enough to know what he's talking about.
(Mar 9, 2019 11:59 AM)Nachfolger Wrote: Your website isn't ugly, but it isn't beautiful, to be completely honest. I'm also not a fan of the extremely dark background, or of dark themes in general. Beyond my personal opinions, I don't like your metric of the proxy speed. Sure, I see why you're using batteries to represent the speed, but it really doesn't even make sense. I would use actual numbers or an icon related to speed, not an icon of something entirely unrelated to speed.
I agree with the icon. Try using something like speedtest.net
Use a speedometer.
Mar 9, 2019 12:11 PM
(This post was last modified: Mar 9, 2019 12:14 PM by ChaoticHaze.)
(Mar 9, 2019 12:02 PM)Agent Shark Wrote: I agree with the icon. Try using something like speedtest.net
Use a speedometer.
Would do if i had Fontawesome PRO license, atm i dont.
(Mar 9, 2019 11:59 AM)Nachfolger Wrote: Your website isn't ugly, but it isn't beautiful, to be completely honest. I'm also not a fan of the extremely dark background, or of dark themes in general. Beyond my personal opinions, I don't like your metric of the proxy speed. Sure, I see why you're using batteries to represent the speed, but it really doesn't even make sense. I would use actual numbers or an icon related to speed, not an icon of something entirely unrelated to speed.
Just cause your not a fan of dark backgrounds shouldn't weigh your feedback in a "constructive" critism post.
(Mar 9, 2019 12:11 PM)ChaoticHaze Wrote: Just cause your not a fan of dark backgrounds shouldn't weigh your feedback in a "constructive" critism post. I clearly disclosed it was an opinion. Ignore it next time if it triggers you.
Soy boy.
Je t'aime
(Apr 22, 2022 04:39 PM)-Scrub Wrote: Jokes on you, I'm not smart enough to know what he's talking about.
(Mar 9, 2019 05:29 AM)ChaoticHaze Wrote: Hello HF,
I would like some serious and constructive feedback for my work in progresss design.
![[Image: b13eba541b.png]](https://puu.sh/CXp3o/b13eba541b.png)
Regards,
ChaoticHaze
The page design is quite decent. There are only a few things i would optimize:
1. The icon needs to be replaced, it is not related to speed so use a progress bar or something like that.
2. The Background color should be something on a gray scale to fit in with your head (Black/White is hard to read)
3. There is somehow a heading missing, something which shows the User where he is and what he sees :)
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