Don Cezar#0258 ✦ www.doncez.art
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Feb 1, 2022 11:23 AM
(This post was last modified: Feb 1, 2022 11:24 AM by A10247.)
Very slick and professional. The only things that I can find wrong with it, is that the fonts aren't the best fit and it's a tad bit too minimal.
Still better than most though, keep it up! Nothing yet...
Very simple but professional, good job. Maybe try experimenting with different fonts.
Looks good, just seeing this quickly I think those smaller boxes under "Payment" and "Contact" at the bottom should either A: Change that slight variation in background color to a higher contrast grey (It's barely noticeable) or B: Take that bright green border from the center column and carry that throughout.
The items at the bottom have rounded corners, while the center images have hard edges. Consider matching them one way or the other. And finally, that "XBOX LIVE GOLD" image has a gradient at the bottom fading to black, and the others do not. It makes that one seem like the odd one out, I'd say use the gradient on all of them or none of them. ![]()
It's a really solid design.
Here are some things I would change though; - Your font could be better. I always aim to use one font for headers and another font for paragraphs since only in some cases these two work together (sans-serif fonts for example). In your case, you seem to use DISPLAY font for both headers and paragraphs which can result in awkward looking designs. Some paragraph fonts I recommend: Poppins, Open Sans, Lato, Proxima Nova. For more, you can visit google fonts and filter by Sans-Serif to always have some good ideas for fonts to use on your next project. - Although you really nailed the layout and everything seems to be aligned properly, your spacing between sections is a bit too close. This can easily be fixed just by moving entire PRICING section about 100px down and it will look much cleaner and readable that way. - Black backgrounds are usually the hardest to do properly as they're way more noticable than white and off-white backgrounds. When working with black backgrounds, make sure to fill them with some stuff. You can check my dark thread by clicking here and see how I filled the dark background with some random vector lines, glowing circles and full-noise background which is used a lot by modern web designers on Dribbble. Other than this, it's a solid design! Good job ✌
Flat design is always a good choice, looks great.
I like it!
Very clean, easy to read and formatted well! I have 2 slight suggestions/tweaks. First, Is perhaps remove the duplicate Xbox logos and Xbox text underneath each pass? as it's already shown and seems repetitive, especially titles. The last thing is, I notice the green tones are slightly off? This happens a lot with Red, Greens and Blues as you may already know. Especially across different screens/devices. I'm currently viewing on a high spec true colour monitor so it stands out massively for me. From what I pulled with the swatch tool your green tone is primarily: #41f541 where as the 2 main (light/dark) tones used in the Xbox branding is: #2ab04a (Light) & #107c10 (Dark) try switching them to match? Other than that great job my man! Hellllaaa clean. Good job :) (Mar 4, 2022 02:46 PM)r3byte Wrote: The last thing is, I notice the green tones are slightly off? This happens a lot with Red, Greens and Blues as you may already know. Indeed there are two tones of green. Found the main green color of xbox but it was too dark to be chosen as text color, so I went with default xbox green for the pass graphics, then a lighter green for the rest of the design to bring more light / life. Thanks for the tips though. Don Cezar#0258 ✦ www.doncez.art
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