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Someone revise my 5 pg essay?

I need someone who is proficient on grammar. I suck at it myself. I written up my term paper on the last minute. It suppose to be 5 pg 12 font, while I made it 13 to fill more space, I am going down for content and length, but I don't want to lose point on grammar. I literally have no time to ask anyone else to revise, as it due in tomorrow.
Essay topic: society of europe after black death.

Link: https://drive[WARNING POSSIBLY INFECTED]google.com/file/d/0B87HQWUG4VPFdEtrSjdBaTZKTEE/view?usp=sharing
Edit version: https://drive[WARNING POSSIBLY INFECTED]google.com/file/d/0B87HQWUG4VPFdjBIeXBvSHA5bkU/view?usp=sharing
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In other words, The the Black Death sped up the changes in medieval society that were already under way.

Also, is this paper supposed to be an academic paper? If so, why are there no sources or citations?
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crowd burnt down

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requesting the lords for increased wages.

Few commas missing or over-used here & there with extensive use of the word 'because' but overall it's well written.
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