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Twitch Offline Screen

So I made this a while ago and wondering what your opinions on it.

Twitch Offline Screen (LARGE):
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It's good, I like it.

Not sure what else I can add as criticism. It does feel slightly generic, like it's a design I've seen several times before, but it serves its purpose.
You can use [IMG=150x150] just change the dimensions.
(Feb 15, 2017 08:46 PM)NGMA_temp Wrote:  You can use [IMG=150x150] just change the dimensions.

Thanks, will edit.
[Image: New-Signature-v2.png]
Looks awesome ! Great job
(May 7, 2017 12:18 PM)*Futurefreak* Wrote:  Looks awesome ! Great job

Thanks man, color correction changes a lot :D
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I like it! Hmu with your twitch XD
(May 7, 2017 06:21 PM)KelseyM Wrote:  I like it! Hmu with your twitch XD

Sent you a PM :)
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Looks clean, collors fit together, overall a nice job and i would rate it 9/10.
(May 8, 2017 05:57 PM)Cryptolution Wrote:  Looks clean, collors fit together, overall a nice job and i would rate it 9/10.

I appreciate it, thank you.
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This looks really good in my opinion.
SeemsGood, looks professional
Looks Clean how much would you want to make me one?
(Aug 6, 2017 03:52 PM)zogonator Wrote:  Looks Clean how much would you want to make me one?

Send me a private message.
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It's a well put together offline screen. It's clean, to the point and there is correct emphasis on each separate element.

I'm assuming you made everything here custom?

Your general composition I would say needs some work. The greens seem a little out of place. When you're using things like logos you want the colors to be neutralized or to stand on their own as they were intended to help identify.

There is already blue in "Havoc" and the twitter logo, so I would have went with different shades of blue, or even teal, or violet as a compliment.

If you were going for an "NVG look" you could have gone more into that direction instead of taking it halfway.

Finally, the texture in "Havoc" doesn't match the background. When it comes to composition- not just colors, but texture is important to remain consistent. It helps the overall aesthetics.

I'm sure you'll get a lot of "good jobs", so the only way to give useful critique is to be picky. Good job.


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