[BRΞNDΞN]

I will get this shit recorded one day

Some days I listen to other rappers on YouTube
Listen to their stories and watch their headlines on the news
Then I open up my computer and try to see if I can write
Just like how they write, even if I know I'm a different type
Oh this song is brutal, cook me some ramen noodles
I don't have a pit but I think I can borrow a poodle
Oh this song is sad and about how his family died
My family's alive and my life's fine, I'm doing alright
But some times I wish had something super bad happen to me
Because songs become better when you add a little tragedy
I wish I had an alter-ego or a crazy ex girlfriend I want to kill
I wish I had a bitch of a mother and an addiction to pills
Why do I live in a nice house, yeah I know it is the hood
But I'm white and can do anything other whites could
I graduated, and in school I was always constantly hated
So I sat in my room with my laptop and chronically masturbated

Why the fuck is there nothing really special about me?
Every rapper before has done something negative or positively
I'am neutrality and honestly nothing to be proud of
My only good songs were in Amerigone, now I'm washed up
Oh and my name, how the fuck can Americunt garner me fame?
Just for having the word in it, people don't look at me the same
Oh but if you're a wacko and illiterate people licking your asshole
But if you're nerdy and white listening to my shit's a hassle
What if I put on a ritz and painted my face fucking black
Then said nigga in every fucking song until I hated every track
Then get hated on by every black rapper because I said the n word
But hey at least being a racist prick got my fucking music heard
Now I'am sorry to those people who actually listen to what I make
Because I'm not like you, and sorry that you can't relate
But the sad part, is that you all call mumble shit art
Then analyze everything I write, and tear me apart?

[prada ⠀]

You can't expect us to create a cadence ourselves. I'll never understand it- showcase it as poetry not music.

Also, try to experiment with other rhyme schemes. Find a beat to flow it over, write it bit by bit.

[GrandpaSherman]

Yeah it doesn't sound good to the cadence I tried ":9 can't wait to hear your recording of it

[DeepBay]

Put it in a simple sound data and release it.
Looks good.

[glitchgxd]

You should just get a headset and record into it or a cheap mic. Quality doesn't have to be incredible (though it helps), but at least then we'd have an idea of how it's supposed to flow.

[fnatic440]

lyrics are actually ok. Not bad. Kind of original; you went a different route.

[BRΞNDΞN]

You guys are right, rhyme scheme drove me nuts.

I recorded, and rapped it a bit off beat. It sounds decent.

[Adaptnesss]

Wow, pretty good homedog with a berry on that bop.

[Tro yeh]

I really tried to rap it in a flow.
And it made a pretty good rap tho.
Nice one.

[Mr. Robot]

You should count your syllables.

[BRΞNDΞN]

You should count your syllables.

I admittedly hated trying to rap this but I made it work

[Marky Mark]

Youre priviledged

Quit bitching

you sound like a fag

who would get fucked up in prison

but of course then you had some better shit to right

but people like you haven't even been in a fight

i hate you

i kill you

i cremate you

and smoke you ashes

you will reincarnate into me

and ill get all the riches

youre the type who looks sad in family pictures

you think you bad

you fooken wot mate

this is youre dad

and ill give you a stab

just like i cut up you mother son

fuck with me and you'll be well done

don't you see what is a steak

when you make the type of comments you make

you're a real fake

and its time to die

so say goodbye

[Marky Mark]

Youre priviledged

Quit bitching

you sound like a fag

who would get fucked up in prison

but of course then you had some better shit to right

but people like you haven't even been in a fight

i hate you

i kill you

i cremate you

and smoke you ashes

you will reincarnate into me

and ill get all the riches

youre the type who looks sad in family pictures

you think you bad

you fooken wot mate

this is youre dad

and ill give you a stab

just like i cut up you mother son

fuck with me and you'll be well done

don't you see what is a steak

when you make the type of comments you make

you're a real fake

and its time to die

so say goodbye