[RalphLauren99]

Made my first low poly, what do you think?
Used smudge on it too...

https://imgur.com/a/d1aKz

[Jopemeister]

the smudge completely removes the effect of low poly design

[Fluffy Bunny]

i suggest you to use smaller shapes (rectangles) to make it more visible

[ᴏracle]

imo with the smudge it looks like shit, if u had much smaller triangles and then use smudge it might of looked better, but you should of got rid of the smudge on your current design

[Ioxnen]

From my experience smaller triangles make low poly look a lot better if you have details and bigger ones for wider spaces. Color blocking is also important when you are doing these type of "artwork".

[Lukas]

the smudge completely removes the effect of low poly design

This.

I understand it's your first and that's fine, just experiment around. You're better than you were before. Remove the smudge, shoot for smaller triangles and more diversity. Keep it up.