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Nov 24, 2018 12:33 PM
(This post was last modified: Nov 24, 2018 09:12 PM by Τelevision.)
Here's my new sig with my username in it surrounded by nature.
Version 1:
Version 2:
Version 3:
Tell me what do you think about this sig and how do you think it could be improved?
Do some more work on the text, seems kind of boring and unfinished?
I like the idea though!
“We are on the verge of a global transformation. All we need is the right major crisis and the nations will accept the New World Order.”
~ David Rockefeller, UN Business Conference, 1991
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Nov 24, 2018 12:38 PM
(This post was last modified: Nov 24, 2018 12:44 PM by Τelevision.)
(Nov 24, 2018 12:35 PM)Conscious Wrote: Do some more work on the text, seems kind of boring and unfinished?
I like the idea though!
Well, I wanted a calm nature vibe, as the river flowing calmly. It's calm, but it has to be.
But I agree, working on the text to make things more exciting could help a bit!
I added a second version to the OP.
I like the background but I dont really feel the text. I think you could improve your text design/font.
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I added a 3rd version with a new text style to bring out the text.
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The fonts you used are quite ugly.
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I agree im not so down with the current text options.
I feel like a better font would be something thin and round/curvy/flowy. Besides the font it looks great.
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Nov 24, 2018 09:31 PM
(This post was last modified: Nov 24, 2018 09:31 PM by PerfectStorm.)
OK well if I had to choose, it would be the first one.
Its actually not too bad.
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Nov 24, 2018 10:04 PM
(This post was last modified: Nov 24, 2018 10:06 PM by Mister Slyther.)
The number of threads that you are posting does not reflect the amount of effort you are putting into this work.
Let's be honest here, I understand you may be a beginner in design, but where is the quality in this work? this looks far too generic and the text looks ridiculously boring.
You could do things more than just grabbing a background image and just throwing text over it.
Try animating the text, try blending it with the background, try fading the text into the oceans with animation etc...look at inspiration work and start from there.
If you do not try to do things differently at all nor actually spend time putting in effort in what you do, then how will you improve here?
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(Nov 24, 2018 10:04 PM)Mister Slyther Wrote: The number of threads that you are posting does not reflect the amount of effort you are putting into this work.
Let's be honest here, I understand you may be a beginner in design, but where is the quality in this work? this looks far too generic and the text looks ridiculously boring.
You could do things more than just grabbing a background image and just throwing text over it.
Try animating the text, try blending it with the background, try fading the text into the oceans with animation etc...look at inspiration work and start from there.
If you do not try to do things differently at all nor actually spend time putting in effort in what you do, then how will you improve here?
No doubt, this is my beginner stage, and I agree I'm keeping things simple. Once I get more experience expect new stuff from me.
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