[Alex Belarto]

What's up fellow designers!

It's not fully done but thought to take your opinions as it is.
You know what to do lol  ✌



Thank you for your time  🤝

[sexmonster]

First time posting after years of not being on this forum so sorry if I say something wrong ...

I like how sleek the design looks. You have the visual part down imho. My advice to you is to try and improve the focus of pages you design. There are 13+ calls to action on this page. Which sorta makes sense if it’s a home page ... but you still should prioritize a single one over the others. For example, your goal is to get the user to sign up, right? So I suggest you dedicate the upper part (above the fold) to explaining the main benefits of signing up and offering one (!) button to sign up. If the visitor is not persuaded, they’ll scroll down ... which is where you hit them with the bonuses ... and then they scroll further ... then there are the casinos! By now, a larger percentage of visitors will convert, because you’re giving them one thing at a time and not overwhelming them with everything at once.

Hope this helps!

[S3AR]

I think its looks good for your second work.

I think you must learn more about color matching. Because i think you must bring some modern or fresh look to design to look it good. But not bad for your second work

Keep up work.

[psychedelics]

this looks fire best ive seen in a min

[Fearow]

Looks great but try to get rid of some of the shadows and glows. Flat is still the in and modern UI that people have come to expect from modern websites. Otherwise you look a bit too much like a flash game.

[TCP]

I like your design, are you only a graphic designer or also a web designer? If you can do html/css send a pm may have a project for you

[Alex Belarto]

Thanks for the comments guys 🤝

[Lukas]

Not that it's bad, but I think it looks more suitable as a thread design. I imagine if this was coded it'd be a Flash file, those of which are outdated by 5+ years minimum.

Cool vision that you have, but I'd definitely shoot for something that's modern and minimal to fit with today's standards. I know it can be hard to show your creativity on such uniform designs, but I believe you can do it.

[Mister Slyther]

I think this isn't particularly with the modern design of today.

The embossing effects and the thin-font choice really puts this design down. Should look at designs on Behance and dribbble to catch up. You have the skills, but you just need to apply them in a modern way.

The white shadow is a big no-no from me, it just doesn't look executed that well with the overall design.

The logo isn't clear, it's as if it's been thrown together. It's all jumbled.

So I would give this a 5/10 for effort.

Here's some inspiration:

https://cdn.dribbble.com/users/757683/sc...nt2_4x.jpg
https://cdn.dribbble.com/users/688456/sc...hot_4x.jpg
https://cdn.dribbble.com/users/366569/sc...ibbble.png
https://cdn.dribbble.com/users/778637/sc..._2x_4x.png