[Alex Belarto]

What's up fellow designers!

I've just completed my first website design in a long time..
So any thoughts you have in mind let them out, I wanna get better.



Thank you for your time  🤝

[Nachfolger]

Everything above the "Our blog" section looks nice. Everything below it just seems weird and thrown together.

I would also separate the email/phone from the icons.

[Alex Belarto]

Everything above the "Our blog" section looks nice. Everything below it just seems weird and thrown together.

I would also separate the email/phone from the icons.

Appreciate the feed-back mate, will see how it looks after those changes.

[Don Vito Corleone]

Add a couple more packages and edit the text into paragraphs, huge blocks of text are not easy read or look at. Looks pretty good overall!

[Alex Belarto]

Add a couple more packages and edit the text into paragraphs, huge blocks of text are not easy read or look at. Looks pretty good overall!

Thanks man, there were no more packages because the client wanted it to be like this, but I diffinetly agree on the text under the photos, they need some modifications.

[Mister Slyther]

Couple of points what I think:

- The footer needs to be completely redone, why a huge block with Terms of service being so incredibly large, and then one small part where all the important links are? you should put the TOS as a link with all the social media links displayed nicely in columns.

Example: https://cdn.dribbble.com/users/374494/sc...2_copy.png

- If you're only going to be put one package, I'd suggest finding a better way, it looks visually odd and strange being the only thing present in that section.
- The header typography is far too thin, you should make that bolder. Especially the text under "Welcome", readability levels are low, making it hard to read.
- The purple block, the first thing at the top is far too short in height, you need to increase the height of it. The social media icons are so small in there, how will phone and tablet users have an easy time clicking them?

Before any design I recommend looking at inspiration on Dribbble and Behance, that will get your creative juices flowing.

Examples of well-executed designs & concepts:

https://cdn.dribbble.com/users/366569/sc...p-full.png
https://dribbble.com/shots/4784220-Live-...s-for-Pros
https://dribbble.com/shots/3894871-Chatlio-Features

Overall this could have been done much better if I'm honest here.

Rating: 6/10.

I urge you not to get demotivated or offended by my review, trust me criticism as a Designer is key to improvement. Often my lecturers and Co-designers shit on my work to push me to improve.

[Alex Belarto]

Couple of points what I think:

- The footer needs to be completely redone, why a huge block with Terms of service being so incredibly large, and then one small part where all the important links are? you should put the TOS as a link with all the social media links displayed nicely in columns.

Example: https://cdn.dribbble.com/users/374494/sc...2_copy.png

- If you're only going to be put one package, I'd suggest finding a better way, it looks visually odd and strange being the only thing present in that section.
- The header typography is far too thin, you should make that bolder. Especially the text under "Welcome", readability levels are low, making it hard to read.
- The purple block, the first thing at the top is far too short in height, you need to increase the height of it. The social media icons are so small in there, how will phone and tablet users have an easy time clicking them?

Before any design I recommend looking at inspiration on Dribbble and Behance, that will get your creative juices flowing.

Examples of well-executed designs & concepts:

https://cdn.dribbble.com/users/366569/sc...p-full.png
https://dribbble.com/shots/4784220-Live-...s-for-Pros
https://dribbble.com/shots/3894871-Chatlio-Features

Overall this could have been done much better if I'm honest here.

Rating: 6/10.

I urge you not to get demotivated or offended by my review, trust me criticism as a Designer is key to improvement. Often my lecturers and Co-designers shit on my work to push me to improve.

Appreciate it mate, especially from someone who has already done such work. That was my first in years I can asure you whats comming will be much better, And no I'm not of those people that are very emotionally sensitive, I can see with my mind's eye and I agree with your points!

[Τroye]

Is this a photoshopped prototype or did you actually code it? It looks great anyway :)

[Mister Slyther]

Appreciate it mate, especially from someone who has already done such work. That was my first in years I can asure you whats comming will be much better, And no I'm not of those people that are very emotionally sensitive, I can see with my mind's eye and I agree with your points!

That's the spirit, my friend. As long as you keep it up, trust me you will achieve and succeed.

Not that I am flawless, I am a designer myself with flaws, all designers have flaws in some way (no matter how experienced and good you are), but hard work will keep us learning and getting better.

[Dr.Joblot]

Everything above the "Our blog" section looks nice. Everything below it just seems weird and thrown together.

I would also separate the email/phone from the icons.

agreed, it feels a bit messy at the bottom

[skzr]

A very nice choice of colors

[postprocess]

You should definitely work on your typography. The weight choices are inconsistent. One trick narrowed down: "Skip a font weight". If the title text for example is bold, let the subtitle text be regular (dependent on the typeface you use of course). Use more letter spacing, as in the footer for example. Who reads such walls of text? Try to summarize everything in just a few short sentences. To get an understand of how your font-sizing might work better, make use of "Gridlover" (you might google it). I am getting overwhelmed with colors, you might just go through material.io and read how exactly you can use colors (especially the accent colors) in a better way. Last but not least, try to use a more professional font - or more professional fonts overall. I've already mentioned them in another topic:

Akzidenz Grotest, Avenir, Avant Garde, Baskerville, Bembo, Bodoni, Bookman, Caslon, Century, Clarendon, Courier, DIN, Franklin Gothic, Frutiger, Futura, Garamond, Gill Sans, Gotham, Helvetica, Letter Gothic, Memphis, Meta, Mrs. Eaves, OCRB, Rockwell, Sabon, Times New Roman, Trade Gothic, Trajan or Univers.

[SIM-3992901]

Very sleek and clean design, nice use of colours. 10/10!

[Τroye]

The logo seems a bit similar to the one microsoft azure has, its a great design tho, nice work!

[PerfectStorm]

I dont know I think its looks decent, nice job.