Walking through the trees
Taking in all of the sights
I lose myself again
Good luck to all the other participants.
I'm high quality
yay i'm a userbar whore
accept me please Beτα
(Jul 28, 2015 07:50 AM)wander is a multi dwc Wrote: Bright birds
Covered by burns
Doom of tomorrow
First try in haiku, not sure if I did it correctly though.
Line 1: 5 syllables
Line 2: 7
Line 5: 5
(Jul 28, 2015 08:25 AM)Notorious™ Wrote: Just writing whatever came to my mind at the time, it is really difficult to express feelings in 3 such small sentences.
Here is my last haiku:
The void is my home;
All I feel is emptiness;
She leaves me speachless.
Spelling speechless correctly might help your odds.
(Jul 28, 2015 08:46 AM)Notorious™ Wrote: I'm sorry for not having an excellent grammar, English isn't my native language, although I try to improve.
No hard feelings, just wanted you to correct it so it wouldn't hinder your chances of acceptance.
(Jul 28, 2015 09:24 AM)Happeh Wrote: The lack of creativity is outstanding.
Btw, if you need help I made a thread on haiku:
https://hackforums.net/showthread.php?tid=4381323
It seems as though people are revolving around sadness as their subject material lol, very repetitive. It is like they are trying TOO hard to be deep.
the key to success
lies in your will to find it
think about this always
As i walk in the bay,
The wind blows as the waves roll,
Summer is where i am.
I walk through the city
Taking in all of the lights
I feel happiness.
(Jul 28, 2015 02:45 PM)Haydrazs Wrote: Roses are red, violets are blue;
let me into void
or i'll ddos you
Vouch for this method. Works 100% of the time.
The sweet smell of flowers
the hot sun touching my skin
I become alive.
Patiently it stalks
moving through the shadows of
your nightmare, fear it
Demented horrors
Dreadfully fill the midnight void
Distant screams at sight.
Her touch is like fire
her words burn into your heart
listen to her speak
Haiku by GTH
People live to argue
You're here for a purpose
Don't let anyone down.
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