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Grammar or other mistakes - Help needed to review few sentences

Sorry posted this in HEALTH SECTION BY MISTAKE. I reported it myself. IT WILL BE MOVED to Education section.

Thanks in advance. :-)

Here's the text:

"If you work for money, you will spend your entire life chasing it and will never get ENOUGH OF IT!

Instead, just do the great work and result will come automatically. Steve Jobs! A man who kept doing just great work and created a company which has became the first $700 BILLION company in USA!"
"It is a simple logic truth that, short of mass emigration into space, with rockets taking off at the rate of several million per second, uncontrolled birth rates are bound to lead to horribly increased death rates."

- Richard Dawkins (The Selfish Gene)
If you work for money you will end up wasting the rest of your life chasing it and you will never get enough of it.

If you want to be successful then do great work and the results will come to you automatically. Steve Jobs, a man who kept doing great work and created a company which has become the first $700 Billion company in the USA!

TIP: I don't know what you mean by great work, so I don't know what to substitute that for sorry man


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